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The life I dreamt of

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Deep into the ocean
And High above the sky,
I want to get lost
letting my soul swim and mind fly.

The world be searching me
On the land and the forest,
I will be on top
Even higher than the Everest.

Birds keep surrounding me
Fishes move on top,
Nothing to follow and
No reason to stop.



Floating in the clouds
And flying with the fish,
I want to live
Just opposite the world is.

Being beside the moon
And water everywhere,
Life is only precious
Where the life is nowhere.






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  1. AprilNovember 10, 2018 at 9:45 AM

    Where did you come up with such a beautiful poem! You should have a book of poems! absolutely beautiful my friend.

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    1. UnknownNovember 10, 2018 at 10:17 AM

      Thank you 😊 it is result of my boring free time.

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  2. NateNovember 10, 2018 at 10:03 AM

    I love the poem you have some excellent skills here!

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  3. UnknownNovember 10, 2018 at 5:45 PM

    This is so amazing! Definitely not something we get to see every day, and I love it!

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  4. UnknownNovember 10, 2018 at 7:50 PM

    You have a talent for writing poetry, such a resonating post! Keep up the amazing work!

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  5. latte lindsayNovember 11, 2018 at 1:38 AM

    This is a lovely poem, poetry is an art from that we don't see very much these days. Well done :)

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  6. UnknownNovember 11, 2018 at 5:29 AM

    Such a beautiful poem! Very well written and displayed. Thank you for sharing

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  7. Wendy LemericNovember 11, 2018 at 6:44 PM

    I love your poem! Such beautiful words. You are talented! Keep it up.

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  8. JoannaNovember 11, 2018 at 6:50 PM

    Very beautiful poem. I can read in it your desire to travel, and you should do it if that's what you are dreaming of.

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  9. Traci FrettNovember 11, 2018 at 6:59 PM

    This poem was a wonderful read! I love your words.

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  10. JoanNovember 11, 2018 at 10:33 PM

    This is really good, great talent I couldn't write a poem even if I tried.

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  11. CandaceNovember 12, 2018 at 12:12 AM

    I'm impressed! Not everybody can write such a beautiful poem. This is art<3 Beautiful words and perfectly written. Keep it up!!

    XO
    Candace
    http://www.thebeautybeau.com

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  12. Anosa MalangaNovember 12, 2018 at 12:29 PM

    I love the words and overall the poem is so nice! You are so talented. Keep it up!

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  13. ZeeNovember 12, 2018 at 7:37 PM

    What a beautiful poem! I can sense some deep peace echoing through it. What inspired this piece?

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  14. UnknownNovember 13, 2018 at 9:35 AM

    You have a beautiful talent for writing. I'm assuming you crafted this as you were hiking or climbing?

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  15. Nina TalksNovember 13, 2018 at 10:36 PM

    Your writing skills are amazing! I love this poem! very deep and so true. You are very talented and should write more poems!

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  16. UnknownNovember 14, 2018 at 1:37 AM

    Nice poem.. u have excellent writing skin😊

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  17. UnknownNovember 14, 2018 at 11:40 PM

    Excellent thought starter. This poem is wonderful.

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